Homework
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1. city-wide blackout: If city-wide blackout happens at night, it will be very dark like it\'s in nature.
2. electricity:Electricity is essential for people to live their lives
3. no power:Most of countrysides in Africa have no power to use electricity
4. generator: Generator is for making electricity
5. brownout: Brownout is needed to save energy
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Hello, Jay!^^
Thank you for sending your homework.
Cheers!
Jean
1. city-wide blackout: If city-wide blackout happens at night, it will be very dark like it\'s in nature.
>> If a city-wide blackout happens at night, the darkness will look natural or like a part of nature.
2. electricity:Electricity is essential for people to live their lives
>> Electricity is essential in people\'s daily lives.
3. no power:Most of countrysides in Africa have no power to use electricity
>> Most countries in Africa don\'t have power or electricity. [no power here means no electricity.]
4. generator: Generator is for making electricity
>> Generators are machines that generate electricity.
5. brownout: Brownout is needed to save energy
>> A brownout is needed to save energy.
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