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Would you ever volunteer to help after a natural disaster hit? If yes, What would you like to volunteer to do? If no, why not?
Yes, i would volunteer to help people who had a natural disaster hit. I\'m living in safe country. There are no disasters here in Korea. Though disaster hits my country, it\'s not that effective unlike other Asian countries. I live with peace. So, i feel i have to help other countries. But, I want to help them in the site. Because I think i can\'t feel how i was helpful for them by donating money. And helping them in the site would be very good experience for me, too
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Would you ever volunteer to help after a natural disaster hit? If yes, What would you like to volunteer to do? If no, why not?
Yes, i would volunteer to help people who had a natural disaster hit.
>> Yes, I would volunteer to help people who went through a natural disaster.
I\'m living in safe country.
>> I\'m living in a country, which experiences only a few minor natural disasters.
There are no disasters here in Korea.
>> correct
>> or: We haven\'t experienced major natural disasters here in my region.
Though disaster hits my country, it\'s not that effective unlike other Asian countries.
>> Though natural disasters hit my country, we\'ve never gone through anything major, unlike other Asian countries.
I live with peace.
>> I live in peace.
So, i feel i have to help other countries. But, I want to help them in the site. Because I think i can\'t feel how i was helpful for them by donating money.
>> For this reason, I feel that I have to help other countries, but I want to personally go to the disaster site because this is more satisfying than just simply donating money.
And helping them in the site would be very good experience for me, too
>> Also, helping them in the site would be a very good experience for me, too.
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