Homework
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Homework
How do you protect yourself from deadly diseases?
I do exercise such as jogging, push up, dumbbell, squat or something 4 times a week after finishing work.
>>I do exercise such as jogging, push-ups, squats, including the use of dumbbells, etc., 4 times a week after finishing work.
I consume some of medicine like a vitamins daily.
>>I take some supplements like vitamins daily.
Even if I have a car, I walk some of near destination instead of driving a car if I can reach the place by my legs.
>>Even if I have a car, I walk when the destination is close and if I can reach the place with my own two legs, instead of driving a car.
I prefer to have healthy food like a rice, soy milk, vegetables, and something instead of fast foods.
>>I prefer to have healthy foods like some rice, vegetables, soy milk and such like instead of fast foods.
I go to hospital for checking my condition as soon as I feel bad.
>>I go to the hospital for a physical check up as soon as I’m feeling not well.
So that my relatives was gone due to cancer, I need to figure out it in advance.
>>Some of my relatives passed away due to cancer, so I need to figure out in advance how to stay healthy.
I think these thinks are helpful to me protecting myself from deadly diseases.
>>I think these measures are helpful for me in protecting myself from deadly diseases.
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