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2019-11-18 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

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How do you protect yourself from deadly diseases? I do exercise such as jogging, push up, dumbbell, squat or something 4 times a week after finishing work. I consume some of medicine like a vitamins daily. Even if I have a car, I walk some of near destination instead of driving a car if I can reach the place by my legs. I prefer to have healthy food like a rice, soy milk, vegetables, and something instead of fast foods. I go to hospital for checking my condition as soon as I feel bad. So that my relatives was gone due to cancer, I need to figure out it in advance. I think these thinks are helpful to me protecting myself from deadly diseases.

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Teacher ELLY.

Homework

How do you protect yourself from deadly diseases?

I do exercise such as jogging, push up, dumbbell, squat or something 4 times a week after finishing work.

>>I do exercise such as jogging, push-ups, squats, including the use of dumbbells, etc., 4 times a week after finishing work.

I consume some of medicine like a vitamins daily.

>>I take some supplements like vitamins daily.

Even if I have a car, I walk some of near destination instead of driving a car if I can reach the place by my legs.

>>Even if I have a car, I walk when the destination is close and if I can reach the place with my own two legs, instead of driving a car.

I prefer to have healthy food like a rice, soy milk, vegetables, and something instead of fast foods.

>>I prefer to have healthy foods like some rice, vegetables, soy milk and such like instead of fast foods.

I go to hospital for checking my condition as soon as I feel bad.

>>I go to the hospital for a physical check up as soon as I’m feeling not well.

So that my relatives was gone due to cancer, I need to figure out it in advance.

>>Some of my relatives passed away due to cancer, so I need to figure out in advance how to stay healthy.

I think these thinks are helpful to me protecting myself from deadly diseases.

>>I think these measures are helpful for me in protecting myself from deadly diseases.

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