homework
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[ESSAY]
In 3~5 sentences, answer the question below:
>> What do you plan on doing on your next vacation?
- I think the next vacation will be in this winter so I want to go to someplace warm. It might be Thailand, Vietnam, Philippine, Singapore, or any country that is not far from Korea. I want to enjoy the warm weather and to swim because I need to take relax.
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Jean
[ESSAY]
In 3~5 sentences, answer the question below:
>> What do you plan on doing on your next vacation?
- I think the next vacation will be in this winter so I want to go to someplace warm.
>> correct
It might be Thailand, Vietnam, Philippine, Singapore, or any country that is not far from Korea.
>> I might go to Thailand, Vietnam, Philippine, Singapore, or any country that is not far from Korea.
I want to enjoy the warm weather and to swim because I need to take relax.
>> I want to enjoy the warm weather and to swim because I need to relax.
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