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학생이 쓴 원문
In Korea, Engineering and politics are as appropriate for men.
So only one woman became a prisident.
Sadly she in the prison.
And in the korean univercity, major of engineering have few women.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]. ^^
It\'s the same thing in the Philippines.
I wish we had more power than we have now. :(
~t. Ally
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In Korea, Engineering and politics are as appropriate for men.
>> In Korea, Engineering and politics are only appropriate for men.
So only one woman became a prisident.
>> That\'s why only one woman became a president in the past.
Sadly she in the prison.
>> Sadly, she is now in prison.
And in the korean univercity, major of engineering have few women.
>> In Korean universities, there are only a few women in the Engineering major.
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