HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
Is going out on dates important for you? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
Yes. Going out on dates is important for me.
But now, I can\'t often enjoy going out on dates because of my daughter.
In the weekend, we go out with my family.
Instead of, when my husband day off in weekdays, we go out on dates together.
We go out to coffee shop or take a walk a trail of mountain.
I think that we need a time to take a rest each other without takeing care of daughter.
강사 첨삭
Hey, Serena. Happy Monday! ^^ I was happy to read your homework today. I think it is important for you and your husband to spend time together and take some time off from taking care of your daughter. It is very essential and productive for both of you as parents. I appreciate your homework once again. Enjoy your evening. ~ teacher Jane c\",)
Yes. Going out on dates is important for me.
>>> CORRECT =)
But now, I can\'t often enjoy going out on dates because of my daughter.
>>> But now, I cannot often enjoy going out on dates because of my daughter.
In the weekend, we go out with my family.
>>> On weekends, I go out with my family.
Instead of, when my husband day off in weekdays, we go out on dates together.
>>> When my husband gets a day off on weekdays, we go out on dates together.
We go out to coffee shop or take a walk a trail of mountain.
>>> We go to a coffee shop or take a walk on a trail on a mountain.
I think that we need a time to take a rest each other without takeing care of daughter.
>>> I think that we need time to take a rest together from taking care of our daughter.
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