Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
-When was the first time you thought life was great? What happened?- (^-^)
When I was 11 years old, I think my life was great.
Because I moved from the city to the country that time.
I felt new and nice evrything.
I raised chickens and grew my own crops.
I had many experinces in the country.
Now I again moved from the country to the city.
So I miss that time.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ellen! Thanks for your thoughts on this one. I appreciate the effort! Keep it up! ^^
-Teacher Jedah
When I was 11 years old, I think my life was great.
>>CORRECT
Because I moved from the city to the country that time.
Because I moved from the city to the country that time.
>>CORRECT
I felt new and nice evrything.
I felt new and nice evrything.
>>I felt that everything was nice and new.
I raised chickens and grew my own crops.
I raised chickens and grew my own crops.
>>CORRECT
I had many experinces in the country.
I had many experinces in the country.
>>CORRECT (misspelled \"experience\")
Now I again moved from the country to the city.
Now I again moved from the country to the city.
>>CORRECT
So I miss that time.
So I miss that time.
>>So, I miss that time at the countryside.
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