Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. estimate:People estimate that many supervisors would come in this conference.
2. approximation:The fact that Korea\'s birthrate has decreased is the approximation to the truth
3. length of service:When it comes to the length of military service, i think the shortest one is the best though it has poor welfare.
4. considered as: Einstein is considered as a genius
5. conscription:Korea is using conscription, but some people try to switch it to volunteer military service.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jay!^^
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Jean
1. estimate:People estimate that many supervisors would come in this conference.
>> People estimated that many supervisors would take part in this conference.
2. approximation:The fact that Korea\'s birthrate has decreased is the approximation to the truth.
>> or: The fact that Korea\'s birthrate has decreased is close to the truth.
3. length of service:When it comes to the length of military service, I think the shortest one is the best though it has poor welfare.
>> correct
4. considered as: Einstein is considered as a genius.
>> correct
5. conscription:Korea is using conscription, but some people try to switch it to volunteer military service.
>> correct
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