Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I’ll collect sonw globes. Some people said those are pretty trash, I think so too. But it’s so cute and I love them! Collecting snow gloves is fit for the purpose. After shaking it, I observe scattering glitters. It’s so beautiful. That’s the why I’d like to collect snow globes.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Gonnie!
Thank you for submitting your homework.
I find snow globes really cute. ^^
I hope that you\'ll be able to start your collection soon.
Anyway, have a good night and see you tomorrow. ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> I\'ll collect snow globes.
Some people said those are pretty trash, I think so too.
>> CORRECT.
But it’s so cute and I love them!
>> CORRECT.
Collecting snow gloves is fit for the purpose.
>> Collecting snow globes fits the purpose.
After shaking it, I observe scattering glitters.
>> After shaking it, I observe the glitters as they scatter.
It’s so beautiful. That’s the why I’d like to collect snow globes.
>> CORRECT.
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