Homework

What makes you a unique person? In my opinion, all of people are unique. Even the twins are not the same. So what I am thinking, shape of my body, tones of my voice, behavior of mine, and all of the things related with me make me special person. For example, I like to eat something know when I visit other countries. I can have Korean foods whenever I want because I am [Name] and usually where I am living is Korea. So I bring other coworkers to the new place where we could have local foods if they ask me where the good place is. Whatever they serve us, I can try. However, others don\'t like to try since they are afraid of having new tastes. So this makes me such an unique person here. And I don\'t remember the name of people, and their face. Thus, I try to greet the others first when I face a person while I am on the way to somewhere. It makes me like an unique person in this site. My boss considers me as a person who knows all of the people working in this site.

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Homework

What makes you a unique person?

In my opinion, all of people are unique.

>>In my opinion, all people have unique qualities.

or>>In my opinion, every person is unique.

Even the twins are not the same.

CORRECT!

or>>Even twins are not that exactly the same.

So what I am thinking, shape of my body, tones of my voice, behavior of mine, and all of the things related with me make me special person.

>>So, I am thinking that the shape of my body, the tone of my voice, my behavior, and all of the things related to me, make me a special person.

For example, I like to eat something know when I visit other countries.

>>For example, I like to eat something that I am familiar with when I visit other countries.

I can have Korean foods whenever I want because I am [Name] and usually where I am living is Korea.

>>I can have Korean foods whenever I want because I am [Name] and I live in Korea.

So I bring other coworkers to the new place where we could have local foods if they ask me where the good place is.

>>So, I bring my coworkers to the new place where we could have local foods if they ask me for a good place to eat.

Whatever they serve us, I can try.

CORRECT!

>>I can taste whatever is served before us.

However, others don\'t like to try since they are afraid of having new tastes.

>>However, the others don\'t like to try since they are afraid of strange tastes.

So this makes me such an unique person here.

>>So, this makes me such a unique person here.

And I don\'t remember the name of people, and their face.

>>I don\'t remember the names and faces of people I’ve just met.

Thus, I try to greet the others first when I face a person while I am on the way to somewhere.

>>Thus, I try to greet them first face to face while I am on my way somewhere.

It makes me like an unique person in this site.

>>It makes me a unique person in this site.

My boss considers me as a person who knows all of the people working in this site.

 

CORRECT!

or>>My boss assumes that I know everyone working at the site.