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Have you ever broken any law? Write about it.
I usually break law when i\'m on a highway. We have speed limitations on highways in Korea. It\'s usually limited to 100 km. But, i only keep this rule when there\'s a observing camera in front of my car. it\'s the only time i reduce my speed. i usually drive on the highways with 120 km. But when i was beginner when it comes to driving, i kept rule well.I think the reason i don\'t keep speed limitation these days is that many people don\'t keep the limitation. it makes me feel like disadvantages when i drive under 100 km. Everyone does like me. so, i felt less guilty. but, i know that it\'s wrong to break limitations. And my country would know this situation,too. i want country makes some solutions for it.
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Jean
Have you ever broken any law? Write about it.
I usually break law when i\'m on a highway.
>> I usually break the traffic law when I\'m on a highway.
We have speed limitations on highways in Korea.
>> We have speed limits on highways in Korea.
It\'s usually limited to 100 km. But, i only keep this rule when there\'s a observing camera in front of my car.
>> It\'s usually limited to 100 km., but I only observe this rule when there are CCTV cameras around that can can capture my car.
it\'s the only time i reduce my speed.
>> This is the only time that I reduce my speed.
I usually drive on the highways with 120 km. But when i was beginner when it comes to driving, i kept rule well.
>> I usually drive on the highways with 120 km., but when I was a beginner driver, I always observed the rule well.
I think the reason i don\'t keep speed limitation these days is that many people don\'t keep the limitation.
>> I think the reason why I don\'t follow the speed limit these days is that many people don\'t keep it as well.
it makes me feel like disadvantages when i drive under 100 km.
>> It makes me feel that I\'m being put at a disadvantage when I drive under 100 km.
Everyone does like me. so, i felt less guilty.
>> Everyone does it like it me that\'s why I feel less guilty.
but, i know that it\'s wrong to break limitations. And my country would know this situation,too.
>> However, I know that it\'s wrong to break the law and my country would know this situation, too.
i want country makes some solutions for it.
>> I hope the government comes up with some effective solutions for it.
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