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Wow!
Thank you for sharing this with me. ^^
I think maturity level should also be considered regarding relationships, so it is also good to marry an older man.
~t. Ally
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Yes I agree.
>> CORRECT!
Traditionally woman marry a one to three older man.
>> Traditionally, women marry men who are one to three years older than them.
So People think that it is special thing which man marry older man even if one to three older woman.
>> So people think that it\'s a special thing when a man chooses to marry a woman who is two to three years older.
If woman marry a much older man, people think that maybe woman is rich.
>> If a woman marries a much younger man, people think that the woman may be rich.
The other way, If woman marry a much older man, people think that it is common situation.
>> On the other hand, if a woman marries a much older man, people think that it is a common situation.
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