HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
Which time of day do you feel you are most productive in your work or study? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
In the morning, I am most productive in my work or study.
I do something to think a lot in the morning.
For example, I dicide on important thing or plan newly.
So I normally sit down in front of desk in the morning,
After I eat launch, I am sleepy. so I meet a friend or take the violin lesson.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Serena. Happy Friday! Thank you for doing your homework and for thinking about it carefully. ^_^ I am glad you keep yourself busy during the day. I look forward to our next class. See you soon. ~ teacher Jane <3
In the morning, I am most productive in my work or study.
>>> CORRECT =)
OR>>> I am most productive in my work or study in the morning.
I do something to think a lot in the morning.
>>> CORRECT =)
OR>>> I keep myself busy by making plans in the morning.
For example, I dicide on important thing or plan newly.
>>> For example, I decide on important things or make plans.
So I normally sit down in front of desk in the morning,
>>> So I normally sit down in front of my desk in the morning.
After I eat launch, I am sleepy. so I meet a friend or take the violin lesson.
>>> After I have lunch, I get sleepy so I meet a friend or take a violin lesson.
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