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2019-11-22 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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What was your favorite book growing up? My favorite book is picture book by Andersen. I like to see the picture and read stories. I read the books to my daughter. My daughter also like the stories.

강사 첨삭

Happy Friday, Serena!^^ Thank you for catching up on your homework. I appreciate it. The original story of the Little Mermaid by Hans Christian Andersen has a very tragic ending though. It is a good thing, Disney made their own version of the Little Mermaid.^^ Maybe, we will have the chance to talk about it in class. ~ teacher Jane c\",)


My favorite book is picture book by Andersen. 
>>> My favorite book is a picture book by Andersen. 

I like to see the picture and read stories.
>>> I like looking at pictures and reading stories. 

I read the books to my daughter.
>>> CORRECT =) 

My daughter also like the stories.
>>> My daughter also likes the stories. 

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