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Do you like space travel?
If I have a chance to have space travel, I am willing to be there.
>>If I have a chance to travel in space, I am willing to do it.
I am wondering about the feeling if I would be at the place with no gravity.
>>I wonder about the feeling of being in a place where there is no gravity.
I will feel like I am flying in the sky.
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or>>It would be like someone flying up in the sky.
Many people have dreamed when they were in youth that we wish we are at the space since it\'s like a curious area human have never conquered (Including deep in the sea).
>>Many people have dreamt in their youth about going to space, since it\'s like a curious area where humans have never fully conquered before (Including the depth of the sea).
And we are wondering about alien whether they exist in ne universe or not.
>>And we wonder about the existence of aliens, whether they exist in our universe or not.
Moreover, there are lack of recourses in the earth and we need to find new things which can be replaced to make energy instead of fuel, coal, or something can make electricity.
>>Moreover, there is a lack of natural resources on earth and we need to find new things that can act as a replacement of energy resources instead of from fuel, coal, etc., that can produce electricity.
If I would do space travel, I will have tried to find another mineral that will be replaced and I would be one of the rich person in the world
>>If I will go on a space travel, I will try to find other minerals that will replace the existing ones, and that would make me one of the richest people in the world
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