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What do you think about Darwin’s theory of evolution? I partly agree with the theory of Darwin\'s evolution. All creatures are evaluated their body, skin, hair and etcetera to maintain their live with natures. For example, a person who lives in desert has long eyebrows, and nose hair since it will block sandstorms into their body. A person who lives in cold place has lot of hair on their body such as chest, arm, legs, face to maintain the temperature of body. An otter in Korea is very cute since they eat some small things like shells. But otter in South africa has big body, sharp nail, and tooth looks like a wild animal. But I am wondering about another things. Some people say human was developed from monkey, orangutan, Australopithecus or etc. But there have been stopped evaluating more than 1,000 years because there is no news and history regarding a person who were an other species. Thus, I am interested in that theory but I can\'t fully agree with it.

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What do you think about Darwin’s theory of evolution?

I partly agree with the theory of Darwin\'s evolution.

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or>>Partially, I am in agreement with Darwin\'s theory of evolution.

All creatures are evaluated their body, skin, hair and etcetera to maintain their live with natures.

>>Every creature has been designed specifically, including their body type, skin, hair, etc., in order for them to be able to adapt and live with nature.

For example, a person who lives in desert has long eyebrows, and nose hair since it will block sandstorms into their body.

>>For example, a person who lives in the desert has long eyebrows and with thicker nasal hair, since it will block the sands from entering the body, especially when there is a sandstorm.

A person who lives in cold place has lot of hair on their body such as chest, arm, legs, face to maintain the temperature of body.

>>A person who lives in a cold place has lots of hair on his or her body, such as on the chest, arms, legs and face to help them maintain their body temperature.

An otter in Korea is very cute since they eat some small things like shells.

>>An otter in Korea is very cute since they eat other small living things like shells.

But otter in South africa has big body, sharp nail, and tooth looks like a wild animal.

>>But an otter in South Africa has a big body, sharp nails, and teeth like that of typical wild animals.

But I am wondering about another things.

>>But I am wondering about other things.

Some people say human was developed from monkey, orangutan, Australopithecus or etc.

>>Some people say that humans evolved from a monkey, an orangutan, an Australopithecus, etc,.

But there have been stopped evaluating more than 1,000 years because there is no news and history regarding a person who were an other species.

>>But they have stopped researching on this for more than 1,000 years, because there have been no news or a written record in history regarding someone evolving from other species.

Thus, I am interested in that theory but I can\'t fully agree with it.

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or>>Therefore, I have a keen interest on this theory but I don\'t fully agree with it.