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I think reality and TV talent show is a great way for time-killing.
>>CORRECT!
Some people criticise them for not being educational.
>>Some people criticize them for not being educational.
However I think reality and TV talent shows have value for this reason.
>>However, I think reality and TV talent shows have values for this reason.
In these days, many things are getting complicated, from our work to social problems.
>>CORRECT!
It is also one of the reasons why they are gaining popularity these days.
>>CORRECT!
>>It\'s one of the factors why they are becoming famous nowadays.
People need some tine to rest without any thoughts.
>>People need some time to rest without any thoughts.
In addition, they don\'t want to get bored.
>>CORRECT!
Therefore people come to the TV to find a program that matches their humor code.
>>Therefore, people come to the TV to find a program that matches their humor code.
Overall I think positive about reality and talent shows, and it has become one of our cultures these days.
>>Overall, I think positively about reality and talent shows, and it has become one of our cultures these days.
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