HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
What are the advantages and disadvantages of watching TV? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
The advantages are that we can enjoy watching TV program like drama, show and documentary.
We can get information and amusement by watching TV easily.
Disadvantages are that we can waste of time and not interested in other activities.
Especially watching TV are not good for kids and baby.
In case of my daughther, she watches TV for 1 ~2 hours per day.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Serena. Thank you for doing your homework. You did a great job. Your sentences are more organized and you were able to express your thoughts through writing. Maybe, we will have the chance to talk about it in class. ~ teacher Jane c\",)
The advantages are that we can enjoy watching TV program like drama, show and documentary.
>>> The advantages are that we can enjoy watching TV programs like drama, show, and documentary.
We can get information and amusement by watching TV easily.
>>> CORRECT =)
OR>>> We can easily get information and amusement by watching TV .
Disadvantages are that we can waste of time and not interested in other activities.
>>> Disadvantages are that we can waste time and lose interested in other activities.
Especially watching TV are not good for kids and baby.
>>> Especially watching TV is not good for kids and babies.
In case of my daughther, she watches TV for 1 ~2 hours per day.
>>> For my daughter, she watches TV for 1 to 2 hours per day.
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