Homework
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1. demonstrations:I think demonstrations is very important to speak their opinion, but it has to be with no violation
2. irresponsible:There are some irresponsible pilots who do not take care of passengers
3. labor unions:labor unions have demonstrations in front of the council to increase their salary
4. demands:Prices are usually decided by the demands
5. partiality:Try to look it based on facts or partiality will be engaged in making a decision
강사 첨삭
Hi Jay^^
Thank you for sending your homework.
Cheers!
Jean
1. demonstrations:I think demonstrations is very important to speak their opinion, but it has to be with no violation
>> I think demonstrations are very important in terms of voicing the public\'s opinion, but it has to be done within the bounds of the law.
2. irresponsible:There are some irresponsible pilots who do not take care of passengers.
>> correct
3. labor unions: Labor unions have demonstrations in front of the council to increase their salary.
>> or: Labor unions have demonstrations in front of the council to demand a pay raise.
4. demands:Prices are usually decided by the demands
>> Prices are usually determined by supply and demand.
5. partiality:Try to look it based on facts or partiality will be engaged in making a decision
>> Try to look at things based on facts to avoid partiality when making decisions.
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