homework

Good afternoon Mr. [이름]^^

It\'s a good thing I went for an early walk this morning.

I didn\'t sleep well, but I feel great after my morning walk.

Thank you for answering your homework. I really appreciate your hard work. :)

Five years ago, I felt a nessesity for exercise because I was very sick and weak at that time.
>>Five years ago, I felt the need to start jogging because I was very sick and weak at the time.
I was thinking about what to do and I chose jogging.
>>I was thinking about what to do and chose to go jogging.
there are few reasons why i chose jogging
>>There are a few reasons why I choose jogging.
OR: There are several reasons why I chose to go jogging.
First, jogging is exercise of the whole body.
>>First, jogging is a whole body exercise.
Many people think about that One of stereotypes of jogging is it’s just good for aerobic and lower body.
>>Many people think that one of the stereotypes about jogging is good for aerobic and lower body.
But it’s good for whole body.
>>But it\'s good for the whole body.
Second thing is that there’s no time and location restriction.
>>Second, there is no time or place restriction.
i could do jogging whenever, wherever I want.
>>I could do jogging whenever, wherever I want.
OR: You can go jogging anytime, anywhere.
Walk road is well made and open it 24 hours every day around my town, so I usually do frequently
>>The walkway is well built and is open 24 hours a day around our town, so I usually go for a jog.
third , it’s easy to access.
>>Third, it\'s easy to access.
All you need is two healthy legs and shoes to start it.
>>CORRECT!
OR: You only need two healthy legs and shoes to start it.
After I started jogging, I got a lot of energy and muscles.
>>After I started jogging, I got a lot of energy and muscle.
And I was able to stay in good condition all the time.
>>And I\'ve always been able to stay in good shape.
i really recommend you to do exercise
>>I really recommend you to exercise.