Homework

Please tell me your favorite food and why do you like that food If someome asked me one food that I only can eat forever including fruit, I would like to chose \'mangosteen\'. The taste of mango steen is sweet and sour which might not be sick of. Even if it has thick skin that I must remove at first, I am willing to eliminate it for having small grain which looks like garlic. If he is not allow me to chose fruit, then I will chose \'pu phat phong curry\'. Eventhough you can see curry on its name, it\'s a Thailand food. The main ingredients are crab that will be malted in the mouth, and curry that is not spicy as much as you guess. I can eat it all day since it\'s so delicious. I think I should have to visit the restuarant where will serve it to me during my vacation next week. I became feeling hungry now. I have got to eat something

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Homework

Please tell me your favorite food and why do you like that food

If someome asked me one food that I only can eat forever including fruit, I would like to chose \'mangosteen\'.

>>If someone asked me the only food that I can eat forever including fruits, I would like to choose “mangosteen”.

The taste of mango steen is sweet and sour which might not be sick of.

>>The taste of mangosteen is both sweet and sour, which would not make me get sick of it, if I have to eat this the whole of my lfe.

Even if it has thick skin that I must remove at first, I am willing to eliminate it for having small grain which looks like garlic.

>>Even if it has a thick skin, which I have to remove first, I am willing to do this just to eat a small grain that looks like a garlic.

If he is not allow me to chose fruit, then I will chose \'pu phat phong curry\'.

>>If he will not allow me to choose this fruit, then I will chose the “pu phat phong curry” instead.

Eventhough you can see curry on its name, it\'s a Thailand food.

>>If you see the word “curry” on its name, it\'s a Thail food.

The main ingredients are crab that will be malted in the mouth, and curry that is not spicy as much as you guess.

>>The main ingredients include some crab meat, which melts in the mouth, and curry, which is not too spicy.

I can eat it all day since it\'s so delicious.

CORRECT!

or>>Since it’s very tasty, I can eat this all day.

I think I should have to visit the restuarant where will serve it to me during my vacation next week.

>>I think I should have to visit the restaurant, where they serve this during my vacation next week.

I became feeling hungry now. I have got to eat something

>>I am feeling hungry now so I will get something to eat.