Homework

What is a culture shock? A year ago, I tried to find a transmitter which I would install on the daybin for checking its level. I looked around all of the offices, areas, and containers in the site. But I didn\'t find it. I though someone thrown it into garbage. So I searched it in. However, I couldn\'t find it since a car which is carrying big bucket with waste things already brought it to the landfill. I needed to find it since I didn\'t want to make the project to be delayed. I asked the address, visit there, and got shock. I could see the mountain made by garbages. And I was shocked there were people who lived in that place. Although there were maggots, rats, flies, and something dirty I couldn\'t define, they lived with their kids. When dump truck had been carrying waste things, they tried to find things they could re-sell to the others as soon as the truck poured it on the ground. it was a culture shock to me I have never gotten. And I appreciate my parents to make me in Korea.

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What is a culture shock?

A year ago, I tried to find a transmitter which I would install on the daybin for checking its level.

>>A year ago, I tried to find a transmitter so I would install it on the “daybin” in order to check the level.

I looked around all of the offices, areas, and containers in the site.

>>I looked all over the office areas, and even on every container within the site.

But I didn\'t find it.

CORRECT!

or>>But I couldn\'t see any.

I though someone thrown it into garbage.

>>I thought someone threw it into the garbage.

So I searched it in.

>>So, I searched for it everywhere.

However, I couldn\'t find it since a car which is carrying big bucket with waste things already brought it to the landfill.

>>However, I couldn\'t find it since a car carried it on a big bucket with the garbage, already brought it to the landfill.

I needed to find it since I didn\'t want to make the project to be delayed.

>>I needed to find it since I didn\'t want to delay the project.

I asked the address, visit there, and got shock.

>>I asked the address, so I visited the place, and I was shocked.

I could see the mountain made by garbages.

>>I can see a mountain of garbage.

or>>I can see a high pile of garbage just like a small mountain.

And I was shocked there were people who lived in that place.

>>And I was shocked because there were people who live in that place.

Although there were maggots, rats, flies, and something dirty I couldn\'t define, they lived with their kids.

>>Although, there were maggots, rats, flies and a pile of dirt, which I couldn\'t define, they still live there with their kids.

When dump truck had been carrying waste things, they tried to find things they could re-sell to the others as soon as the truck poured it on the ground.

>>When a dump truck carrying waste materials arrived, they tried to find things they could re-sell to other people, as soon as it started discharging its load on the ground.

it was a culture shock to me I have never gotten.

>>it was kind of a culture shock for me, which I have never experienced before.

And I appreciate my parents to make me in Korea.

>>And I became more appreciative of my parents for giving birth to me in Korea.