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I thibk that all human beings belong to one race.
>>I think that all human beings belong to one race.
The science of genetics demonstrates that humans cannot be divided into biologically distinct subcategories.
>>CORRECT!
and it challenges the traditional concept of different races of humans as biologically separate and distinct.
>> And it challenges the traditional concept of different races of humans as biologically separate and distinct.
This is validated by many decades of research.
>>CORRECT!
>>Researchers for decades validated it.
In other words, “race itself is a social construct,” with no biological basis.
>>CORRECT!
Reason why some believe humanity is devided into distinct race is because of different skin colour and body shape.
>>The reason why some believe humanity is divided into distinct race is because of different skin color and body shape.
However I think that all human beings started as one race and evoluated according to the climate and landscapes.
>>However, I think that all human beings started as one race and evolved according to the climate and landscapes.
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