HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
How would you rate the way that your parents brought you up? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
My parents couldn\'t care my learning from school because they have many daughter and son.
They were always busy with working.
Instead, they teached me good manner, responsibility and honestness.
My parents made me do homework everyday.
But they didn\'t say that I have to study hard.So, I studied subjects from shchool for myself.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Serena. Thank you once again for doing your homework. I hope you had a wonderful time with your friend^^ It must have been hard to study by yourself when you were younger but I am glad to hear you developed a wonderful personality because of your parents. Have a wonderful weekend. Until the next homework. ~ teacher Jane ^___^
My parents couldn\'t care my learning from school because they have many daughter and son.
>>> My parents could not monitor my progress in school because they have many children.
They were always busy with working.
>>> They were always busy with work.
Instead, they teached me good manner, responsibility and honestness.
>>> Instead, they taught me good manners, responsibility, and honesty.
My parents made me do homework everyday.
>>> My parents made me do homework every day.
But they didn\'t say that I have to study hard.
>>> But they did not say that I have to study hard.
So, I studied subjects from shchool for myself.
>>> So I studied the subjects by myself.
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