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Who are the people i always check on?
I should always check on my children everywhere.
They are so young to be indepent. For example, they can\'t get up in the morning, can\'t wash their faces, and can\'t put on their clothes for themselves.
When i go out with my children, (not go with them, bring with them), I always keep my eyes on them whether cars are coming and going near them. It sometimes makes me tired. Nevertheless, above mentioned, I already get used to living this life so i couldn\'t imagine i am not with them.
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Hello [이름]. Thank you for this. Being a mother takes a lot of sacrifices, but it is all worth it.
- T. Beth
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I should always check on my children everywhere.>>> correct
They are so young to be indepent.
They are so young to be indepent.
>>> They are still quite young to be independent.
For example, they can\'t get up in the morning, can\'t wash their faces, and can\'t put on their clothes for themselves.
>>> For example, they can\'t get up in the morning, can\'t wash their faces, and can\'t put on their clothes by themselves.
When i go out with my children, (not go with them, bring with them), I always keep my eyes on them whether cars are coming and going near them.
>>> When I take my children out, I always keep my eyes on them whether cars are coming and going near them.
It sometimes makes me tired.
>>> correct
Nevertheless, above mentioned, I already get used to living this life so i couldn\'t imagine i am not with them.
>>> Nevertheless, above mentioned, I already got used to living this life so I can\'t imagine being without them.
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