homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Thank you [이름]!
~Teacher Lucy
Trains are important in our country.
>>CORRECT!
>>Trains are essential in our country.
The role as passenger traffic has decreased over the years, due to the deveopment of cars, airplanes.
>>The role as passenger traffic has decreased over the years, due to the development of cars and airplanes.
However, sometimes trains are faster, even when we add the waiting time.
>>CORRECT!
>>Moreover, trains are faster.
And the train system is also good.
>>CORRECT!
>>The system is good.
We can easily find the train we have to get on, and which station to get off.
>>CORRECT!
>>We can easily find where to get on and to get off.
Nevertheless, these days, trains serve more important role as transporting goods.
>>CORRECT!
Even with the development of airplanes, trains are still useful.
>>CORRECT!
>>Trains are still useful even airplanes roll out.
Things that are produced in our country, and not as important,are transported by trains.
>>Things that are produced in our country, and not as important as transported by trains.
Therefore, we do have a good train system and it is still important in our country.
>>CORRECT!
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