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Why do you think that shaking hands is the most common greeting around the world?
I think shaking hands is the most burdenless greeting. So, it is the most common greeting around the world. greetings differs based on the countries\' culture. So, What is very common thing to open-mind country could be very burdenless to countries which has defensive greeting cultures. Viewed In this way, Shaking hands is the most proper greeting for all countries. That\'s why shaking hands is the most common greeting around world.
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Why do you think that shaking hands is the most common greeting around the world?
I think shaking hands is the most burdenless greeting. So, it is the most common greeting around the world.
>> I think shaking hands doesn\'t give any burden or pressure to the person that\'s why it\'s the most common greeting around the world.
greetings differs based on the countries\' culture.
>> Greetings differ based on the country\'s culture.
So, What is very common thing to open-mind country could be very burdenless to countries which has defensive greeting cultures.
>> So, something that is very common to open-minded countries could be very burdensome to countries that have defensive greeting cultures.
Viewed in this way, shaking hands is the most proper greeting for all countries.
>> correct
That\'s why shaking hands is the most common greeting around world.
>> That\'s why shaking hands is the most common greeting around the world.
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