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2019-12-03 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

My priority in my life is my family\'s physical and mental health In Korea, family is especially important. Korean proverb have a sentance related family. Which is that if family is happy, we can solve well every things.

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My priority in my life is my family\'s physical and mental health
>> My priority in life is my family\'s physical and mental health. 

In Korea, family is especially important.
>> CORRECT~~

Korean proverb have a sentance related family.
Which is that if family is happy, we can solve well every things.
>> There\'s a Korean proverb that\'s related to family, which is something along the lines of if the family is happy, we can solve everything well. 

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