homework
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What is the best way to get rid of colds? Answer in 5 sentences or more.
Whenever I caught a cold and went to see a doctor, the doctor told me to drink a lot of water and rest well. Based on those professionals\' recommendations, rest is the best way to get rid of colds. We usually catch colds when we\'re tired so resting well can be one of the best way to get rid of colds. While resting, drinking some herb tea or eating foods which give us some stamina might be helpful. If the cold doesn\'t go away easily, get some proper medicine from doctors or pharmacists would be better.
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Hi [이름]!
You said it so well.
These are things that people are already familiar with.
However, your thoughts are so organized so it\'s like reading a new idea for the first time.
You did really well.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Whenever I caught a cold and went to see a doctor, the doctor told me to drink a lot of water and rest well.
>> Whenever I catch a cold and go see a doctor, he would tell me to drink a lot of water and rest well.
Based on those professionals\' recommendations, rest is the best way to get rid of colds.
>> Correct
We usually catch colds when we\'re tired so resting well can be one of the best way to get rid of colds.
>> We usually catch a cold when we\'re tired so resting well can be one of the best ways to get rid of colds.
While resting, drinking some herb tea or eating foods which give us some stamina might be helpful.
>> While resting, drinking herb tea or eating foods which give us more stamina might be helpful.
If the cold doesn\'t go away easily, get some proper medicine from doctors or pharmacists would be better.
>> If the cold doesn\'t go away easily, getting proper medicine from doctors or pharmacists would be a good idea.
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