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2019-12-03 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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In not less than 5 sentences, answer the following: What is your opinion about violence in TV, movies, and video games? Suggest a way to stop this. I think TV and game, movie going to more violence or horror recently. When I was young, I couldn\'t see adult grade movie. I have prove my age and have to clear the certification procedure to watch. But, we can see the adult grad movie, game, program too easily. So, I think this can be bad affect to kids or child. They can know too fast ? :P

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In not less than 5 sentences, answer the following:
What is your opinion about violence in TV, movies, and video games? Suggest a way to stop this.

I think TV and game, movie going to more violence or horror recently.

>> I think TV, games and movies are more violent recently.

When I was young, I couldn\'t see adult grade movie. 

>> Correct
 I have prove my age and have to clear the certification procedure to watch.

>>  I had to prove my age and had to clear the certification procedure to watch.

But, we can see the adult grad movie, game, program too easily.

>> But now, we can easily see adult graded games, movies or programs.

So, I think this can be bad affect to kids or child. They can know too fast ? :P

>> So, I think this has a bad effect to kids or children. They can learn too fast.

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