Homework

It depends on a situation, and a person with me. There is some explanation below. If I feel sad, I like to share the feeling with a person. While we are having conversation, I think my bad feeling would become better. When I feel lonely, or bored, I prefer being with a person who enjoys free time. Actually, I didn\'t use to have these feeling I mentioned since I could find something I played. But, after I met a girl like a foxy a year ago, I used to feel bored. I think I should find the one who will enjoy her life, and who helps weakness of each others to be improved. On the other hand, I don\'t prefer being with a person who use to have smoke, and alcohol. I like having social gathering since it makes our relationship to be close. But, having my time with them on that situation is a kind of wasting of my time since many people in Korea like to have the time because they are already addicted at drinking. Anyways, limitation of writing is almost finished. So I am done with this.

Hello [이름],

Thank you for your ideas in today’s homework!

Have a nice Wednesday!

Teacher ELLY.

Homework

It depends on a situation, and a person with me.

>>It depends on the situation, and on the person who’s with me.

There is some explanation below.

>>There are some explanations below.

If I feel sad, I like to share the feeling with a person.

>>If I feel sad, I would like to share this feeling with someone.

While we are having conversation, I think my bad feeling would become better.

>>While we are having a conversation, I think the bad emotions I’m feeling will become much better.

When I feel lonely, or bored, I prefer being with a person who enjoys free time.

>>When I feel lonely or bored, I prefer being with a person who enjoys having some free time.

Actually, I didn\'t use to have these feeling I mentioned since I could find something I played.

>>Actually, I didn\'t use to have these feelings I’ve mentioned, since I busy myself with a lot of activities.

But, after I met a girl like a foxy a year ago, I used to feel bored.

>>But, after I met a foxy girl a year ago, I started feeling bored.

I think I should find the one who will enjoy her life, and who helps weakness of each others to be improved.

>>I think, I should find someone who enjoys and likes her life to the full, and who helps others improve their weaknesses.

On the other hand, I don\'t prefer being with a person who use to have smoke, and alcohol.

>>On the other hand, I prefer not being with a person who smokes and drinks alcohol.

I like having social gathering since it makes our relationship to be close.

>>I like going to social gatherings since it makes us become closer and it cements our relationship even more.

But, having my time with them on that situation is a kind of wasting of my time since many people in Korea like to have the time because they are already addicted at drinking.

>>But, spending a lot of time with them in that situation is a kind of wasting my time, since many people in Korea like to spend much of their time on these things, because they are already addicted to drinking.

Anyways, limitation of writing is almost finished.

>>Anyways, the time limit on this writing is almost over.

So, I am done with this.

CORRECT!

or>>So, I’d better stop writing right now.