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What is your biggest goal in life?
I want to live my life happily till i die. When i was young, i just wanted to earn a lot of money, But, getting older,i realize that money is not the all thing. There are many things to be happy. Money is just one of them. but, i always go back and forth. And maybe someday, this kinds of though would be changed. Whatever it is, the biggest goal in my life is to be happy
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Hi Jay^^
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Jean
What is your biggest goal in life?
I want to live my life happily till i die.
>> or: I hope to live a happy life until the end of my days.
When i was young, i just wanted to earn a lot of money, But, getting older, i realize that money is not the all thing.
>> When I was younger, I just wanted to earn a lot of money, but as I grew older, I realized that money is not everything.
There are many things to be happy.
>> There are many things or ways that can make someone happy.
Money is just one of them. but, i always go back and forth. And maybe someday, this kinds of though would be changed.
>> Money is just one of them, but I always change my mind and maybe someday, this kind of outlook would changed again.
Whatever it is, the biggest goal in my life is to be happy.
>> correct
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