HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
How do you feel about going to parties? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
I like to go parties. In December, people often go parties.
For example, family gatthering parties, frends gathering parties and year ending parties in company.
I will go friends gathering parties in this weekend, family gathering parties next weekend.
I am so expeting parties.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Serena. It seems December is also a busy month for you. I am happy to know you enjoy going to parties. Thank you for sharing once again and I look forward to our class on Friday. See you!^___^ ~ teacher Jane
I like to go parties.
>>> I like going to parties.
In December, people often go parties.
>>> In December, people often go to parties.
For example, family gatthering parties, frends gathering parties and year ending parties in company.
>>> For example family gatherings, friends\' gatherings, and year-end parties in the company.
I will go friends gathering parties in this weekend, family gathering parties next weekend.
>>> I will go to a group of friends\' gathering this weekend and a family gathering next weekend.
I am so expeting parties.
>>> I am looking forward to parties.
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