Homework

Do you agree that planes are much safer to ride? I have no idea what I have to compare with planes. If I compare airplane with a car, I think the car is much safer than the airplane. There is a kind of famous formula \'F = M x A\'. The airplane must be heavier than the car even if it\'s a transporter. Moreover, The airplane might be accelerated than the car during a same time. Thus, I am sure that the car is much safer than the airplane in normal case. But, if I add a situation, which is a possibility to be faced in an accident, with the proposition, the result would be changed. For example, the road for car is not safer than the plane because of many pedestrians, animals, and the other cars. It\'s a quite hard to turn the handle since there are narrowed space on the road. But, there are plenty of space for the airplane, and the pilot does not take care of birds since it is not be affected to the plane. In conclusion, it depends on a situation and the materials which are compared with.

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Homework

Do you agree that planes are much safer to ride?

I have no idea what I have to compare with planes.

>>I have no idea what I have to compare the planes with.

If I compare airplane with a car, I think the car is much safer than the airplane.

>>If I compare an airplane with a car, I think the car is much safer than the airplane.

There is a kind of famous formula \'F = M x A\'.

>>There is kind of a famous formula which goes this way, \'F = M x A\'.

The airplane must be heavier than the car even if it\'s a transporter.

>>The airplane must be heavier than the car because it transports people and things.

Moreover, The airplane might be accelerated than the car during a same time.

>>Moreover, the airplane may have a higher acceleration rate than that of the car at a given range of time.

Thus, I am sure that the car is much safer than the airplane in normal case.

>>Thus, I am sure that the car is much safer than the airplane in a normal situation.

But, if I add a situation, which is a possibility to be faced in an accident, with the proposition, the result would be changed.

>>But, if I we add another factor, there is now a possibility for it to face an accident. With this proposition, the result could change.

For example, the road for car is not safer than the plane because of many pedestrians, animals, and the other cars.

>>For example, the roads for cars are not that much safer than the runway used by planes, because of the many pedestrians, animals, and other cars.

It\'s a quite hard to turn the handle since there are narrowed space on the road.

>>It\'s quite hard to turn the steering wheel since there are some narrow parts on the roads.

But, there are plenty of space for the airplane, and the pilot does not take care of birds since it is not be affected to the plane.

>>But, the sky offers plenty of space for the airplane to navigate, and the pilots need not concern themselves with the birds since they don’t often affect the planes.

In conclusion, it depends on a situation and the materials which are compared with.

>>In conclusion, it depends on the situation including the other factors that can affect the whole scenario.