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How much does the weekend mean to you?
It is a very important thing for me. Because i can go out only on the weekend. i can spend time having lunch with my family and hanging out with my friends. It\'s a rest time for the next week. But, it didn\'t mean a lot like this before i enlist in army. i wasted time before because i had a lot of time. it made me lazy. The most helpful thing when i enlist in army is that i realize how much time is precious.
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Hi Jay^^
Thank you for sending your homework.
Cheers!
Jean
How much does the weekend mean to you?
It is a very important thing for me. Because i can go out only on the weekend.
>> It is a very important thing for me because I can go out only on the weekends.
I can spend time having lunch with my family and hanging out with my friends.
>> I can spend my time having lunch with my family and hanging out with my friends.
It\'s a rest time for the next week. But, it didn\'t mean a lot like this before i enlist in army.
>> It\'s a rest time for the coming week, but the weekends didn\'t mean a lot like to me before I enlisted in the army.
I wasted time before because I had a lot of time. It made me lazy.
>> correct
The most helpful thing when i enlist in army is that i realize how much time is precious.
>> One good thing about my enlistment is that I realized how precious time is.
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