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2011-12-14 · 첨삭 강사 Dominic

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Hi Dominic, Today's homework seems to be a little difficult.^^ Please correct my composition. 1. Cookies car deliver Julie. Julie delivered cookies by car. 2. Beach waves high afternoon. Beach waves was high in the afternoon. 3. Bring Samantha kids hospital. Samatha brouhgt her kids to the hospital. 4. Gain weight woman hate question. Woman hates questions about gaining weight.

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    Hello Ms. [Name], I'm so delighted! You did a wonderful job in your homework.^^ It's always a pleasure to be able to help you out learn from you everyday. I'll see you later.   Hi Dominic, >>CORRECTToday\'s homework seems to be a little difficult.^^ >>CORRECTPlease correct my composition. >>CORRECT >>Kindly correct my composition.1. Cookies car deliver Julie. Julie delivered cookies by car. >>CORRECT >>Julie delivers cookies by car.2. Beach waves high afternoon.Beach waves was high in the afternoon. >>The waves on the beach are high in the afternoon.3. Bring Samantha kids hospital.Samatha brouhgt her kids to the hospital. >>CORRECT [please be careful of the spelling] >>Samantha brought her kids to the hospital.4. Gain weight woman hate question.Woman hates questions about gaining weight. >>CORRECT >>The woman hates questions about weight gain.      

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