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2019-12-09 · 첨삭 강사 James

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Q. Do you like meeting new people? Why or why not? Explain in 5-6 sentences A. I do love meeting new people! I think I am a really outgoing person. Knowing others, i can learn how to deal with the situation depends on a person, i mean how to deal senior and foreigner. At first, i don\'t know well about the manners. But after i met a lot of people, I\'m getting skillful to dealing others. And I can get a lot of lessons and refresh energy from new people. You know, because of everyday routine, We met same people day by day. But meeting new people, we can learn different major, work, hobbies and even we can get new energy.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Layla! Thanks for sending in your homework. Great job!

-T. James-

I do love meeting new people!

>>> CORRECT

>>OR: I love meeting new people.
I think I am a really outgoing person.

>>> I think, I\'m an outgoing person.
Knowing others, i can learn how to deal with the situation depends on a person, i mean how to deal senior and foreigner.

>>> Knowing others, I can learn how to deal with situations it depends on a person, I mean how to deal senior and foreigner.
At first, i don\'t know well about the manners.

>>> At first, I don\'t know well about manners.
But after i met a lot of people, I\'m getting skillful to dealing others.

>>> But after I met a lot of people, I\'m getting skillful in dealing with others.
And I can get a lot of lessons and refresh energy from new people.

>>> And I can acquire a lot of lessons and refresh my energy through meeting new people.
You know, because of everyday routine, We met same people day by day.

>>> You know, because of everyday routine, we met the same people day by day.
But meeting new people, we can learn different major, work, hobbies and even we can get new energy.

>>> But meeting new people, we can learn about different majors, work, hobbies and even we can get new energy.

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