Homework

I would like to write the thing that we discussed this morning since I couldn\'t explain it well. I couldn\'t make you understood because I didn\'t know that topic well. Anyways, the war called 6.25 was happened owing to ideological conflict. There were two type of government in Korea. The one was democracy in south korea with America, and another was communism in north korea with China, and Soviet union. A person whom called mr kim in north korea wanted to make korea to become one country so he asked helping him from Soviet, and China. After the un forces, and America were engaged in the war, it became an ideological conflict in the world. The war had been giving suffering to the people for 3 years, and it was finished after the Armistice Agreement was decided by northe korea and un forces. Because our country, south korea, didn\'t have enough power to protect ourselves, the agreement was handled by UN forces instead of south korea. It\'s the story that I read in web site.

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I would like to write the thing that we discussed this morning since I couldn\'t explain it well.

>>I would like to write the topic that we have discussed this morning since I couldn\'t explain it well.

I couldn\'t make you understood because I didn\'t know that topic well.

>>I couldn\'t make you understand because I didn\'t know this topic well.

Anyways, the war called 6.25 was happened owing to ideological conflict.

>>Anyways, the war, which was called “6.25”, happened owing to an ideological conflict.

There were two type of government in Korea.

>>There were two types of governments in Korea.

The one was democracy in south korea with America, and another was communism in north korea with China, and Soviet union.

>>The first one was a democratic government in South Korea with the support of America, and the other was a communist government in North Korea with the help of China and the Soviet Union.

A person whom called mr kim in north korea wanted to make korea to become one country so he asked helping him from Soviet, and China.

>>A person called Mr. [Name] in North Korea wanted to create Korea as just one country asked for help from the Soviet Union and China.

After the un forces, and America were engaged in the war, it became an ideological conflict in the world.

>>After the UN Allies, with America engaged in the war, it became an ideological conflict in the world.

The war had been giving suffering to the people for 3 years, and it was finished after the Armistice Agreement was decided by northe korea and un forces.

>>The war has caused suffering to the people for 3 years, and it ended after the Armistice Agreement was signed by North Korea and the UN Allies.

Because our country, south korea, didn\'t have enough power to protect ourselves, the agreement was handled by UN forces instead of south korea.

>>Because our country, South Korea, didn\'t have enough power to protect its citizens, the agreement was handled by the UN Allies instead of South Korea.

It\'s the story that I read in web site.

>>This is the story that I have read on a website.