Homework

In the past, there was no signal to keep in touch with each other on the phone. At that time, people had to communicate in letter. It took for a long time due to duration of delivery. If they wanted to meet one day, they had made an appointment with the details, such as day, time, what they would wear, and specific location. Moreover they had to consider duration of delivery. Nowadays, we can use mobile phone so that we can communicate whenever we want. We don\'t need to appointment in details as much as before. If we couldn\'t find the area, then call to the person make sure the time and location again. Furthermore, we don\'t need to remember phone number too. Since technology has been developed, everythings are able to handle fast. So that, people don\'t want to wait for the things as much as in the past. Thus, the phenomenon change mind of people to become in hurry, and busy. That\'s why we are always in hurry even if the thing what they are doing is not.

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Homework

In the past, there was no signal to keep in touch with each other on the phone.

>>In the past, there were no towers built to send signals in order for people to keep in touch with each on the phone.

At that time, people had to communicate in letter.

>>At that time, people had to communicate by writing letters.

It took for a long time due to duration of delivery.

>>It takes a long time for the letter to reach its destination due to the delivery time.

If they wanted to meet one day, they had made an appointment with the details, such as day, time, what they would wear, and specific location.

>>If they want to meet on a certain day, they had to make an appointment by giving specific details such as the day, time, what they are wearing and the specific location.

Moreover they had to consider duration of delivery.

>>Moreover, they had to consider the duration of the delivery.

Nowadays, we can use mobile phone so that we can communicate whenever we want.

>>Nowadays, we can use a mobile phone to communicate with each other whenever we want.

We don\'t need to appointment in details as much as before.

>>We don\'t need to appointment in details as much as before.

If we couldn\'t find the area, then call to the person make sure the time and location again.

>>If we couldn\'t find the area, then we call the person to make sure that the time and the location are correct.

Furthermore, we don\'t need to remember phone number too.

>>Furthermore, we don\'t need to remember so many phone numbers.

Since technology has been developed, everythings are able to handle fast.

>>Since the technology has been developed, everything are handled very quickly.

So that, people don\'t want to wait for the things as much as in the past.

>>So that, people these days don\'t want to wait for things anymore, as much as they did in the past.

Thus, the phenomenon change mind of people to become in hurry, and busy.

>>Thus, a phenomenon has changed the minds of the people to be in a hurry and they have become very busy.

That\'s why we are always in hurry even if the thing what they are doing is not.

>>That\'s why we are always in a hurry even if what are doing is not really that important.

or>>That\'s why we are always in a hurry even if it is not necessary.