Homework
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What do people often forget to do on time?
People often forget to do something not special. In my case, i take vitamin C supplements everyday. But, i often forget to take them. I think it\'s because it\'s not noticeable. Although i don\'t take them for a day, There is no big difference. But,i think this small habit can make bigger things. So, To make big difference, i have to pay attention to theses kinds of small things.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Jay!
Thank you for taking time to do your homework. ^^
I will attach some corrections below.
Keep it up!
~t. Ally
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People often forget to do something not special.
>> People often forget to do something trivial.
In my case, I take vitamin C supplements everyday.
>> CORRECT!
But, I often forget to take them. I think it\'s because it\'s not noticeable.
>> CORRECT!
Although I don\'t take them for a day, There is no big difference.
>> Even if I forget to take them for a day, there won\'t be any big difference.
But,i think this small habit can make bigger things.
>> But, I think this small habit can turn into something bigger.
So, To make big difference, i have to pay attention to theses kinds of small things.
>> So, to make a big difference, I have to pay attention to these kinds of small things.
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