HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you prefer summer vacations or winter vacations? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
I prefer summer vacation because I don\'t like coldness.
So, we have a plan to go Viet[이름] where is warm place in commiming this winter vacation,
And my daugter likes to go swimming very much.
So, I will bring swim suit to Viet[이름].
I am looking forward to the trip.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Serena. Great job with the homework. Continue to check the corrections and just be careful with the spelling. I appreciate you keeping up the homework. Let\'s talk again on Friday. See you! ~ teacher Jane c\",)
I prefer summer vacation because I don\'t like coldness.
>>> I prefer summer vacations because I don\'t like the cold weather.
So, we have a plan to go Viet[이름] where is warm place in commiming this winter vacation,
>>> So we have a plan to go to Viet[이름] where it is warm this coming winter vacation.
And my daugter likes to go swimming very much.
>>> And my daughter likes to go swimming very much.
So, I will bring swim suit to Viet[이름].
>>> So I will bring swimsuits to Viet[이름].
I am looking forward to the trip.
>>> CORRECT =)
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