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At what age do people usually begin to work in your country? Do you think it\'s too late or too soon?
It depends on whether you go to university or not. If you enroll in university, It would be too late. or not It would be very short. It\'s the problem. There is no in-between. It\'s has a too big gap. It\'s hard to fix it because it has already been settled deeply in society. To make matters worse, Korea is in economic recession.So,major companies are reducing jobs, The time getting a job is getting late.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Jay. ^^
That\'s true, I\'ve heard of the economic situation in Korea, and it truly is quite scary. :(
I hope you will get good opportunities when the time comes. ^^
~t. Ally
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It depends on whether you go to university or not.
>>It depends on whether you go to a university or not.
If you enroll in university, It would be too late. or not It would be very short. (the opposite of late is early ^^)
>> If you enroll in a university, it would be too late, or it could be to early.
It\'s the problem. There is no in-between.
>> The problem is, there is no in- between.
It\'s has a too big gap. It\'s hard to fix it because it has already been settled deeply in society.
>> It has too wide of a gap, and it\'s hard to fix because it has already settled into our society deeply.
To make matters worse, Korea is in economic recession.
>> CORRECT!
So,major companies are reducing jobs, The time getting a job is getting late.
>> So now, major companies are reducing job opportunities and getting a job is more difficult.
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