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2019-12-16 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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[ESSAY] In 3~5 sentences, answer the question below: >> How can stress be good, useful, or necessary? When you need to hurry to finish something, a bit of stress would be helpful. It might let you focus on it yourself. For instance, if you have a day of a deadline and you haven\'t done anything yet, you might feel some pressure about it. We can call it to stress and it might help you a lot.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Jake!^^

Thank you for sending your homework. 



Cheers!
Jean

[ESSAY]
In 3~5 sentences, answer the question below:
>> How can stress be good, useful, or necessary?

When you need to hurry to finish something, a bit of stress would be helpful. 
>> or: When you are rushing something, a bit of stress could be helpful. 

It might let you focus on it yourself.
>> It might make you focus on your task more. 

 For instance, if you have a day of a deadline and you haven\'t done anything yet, you might feel some pressure about it. 
>>  For instance, if you have a deadline and you haven\'t done anything yet, you might feel some pressure to work. 

We can call it to stress and it might help you a lot.
>> We can call it stress and it might help you a lot. 

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