Homework

Do Korean men cry? Why or why not? I think it\'s a weird question. There is no rule that Korean men shouldn\'t cry. And Korean men are also human same as other guys who have other nationality. Even if the color of skin, mother language, where we are living at, are bit different, but we have same XY DNA as others. We are able to cry when we sad, or too happy. I often cry when I watch sad drama, and movies. If there is a law Korean men can\'t cry, then I will change my nationality to the other place which allows me to show my sadness. I can\'t control tear dropping. Moreover, to make stop tear dropping while yawn is very hard to be controlled since it\'s a kind of natural response. Anyways, I just finish this writing.

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Homework

Do Korean men cry? Why or why not?

I think it\'s a weird question.

CORRECT!

or>>I think that this question is a bit strange.

There is no rule that Korean men shouldn\'t cry.

CORRECT!

or>>There is no existing law that states Korean men shouldn\'t cry.

And Korean men are also human same as other guys who have other nationality.

>>And Korean men are also human beings, the same as other guys who of other nationalities.

Even if the color of skin, mother language, where we are living at, are bit different, but we have same XY DNA as others.

>>Even if one’s skin color, mother tongue and the place where one lives, are a bit different, all of us still have the same XY DNAs, just like others.

We are able to cry when we sad, or too happy.

>>We are able to cry when we are sad, or too happy.

I often cry when I watch sad drama, and movies.

>>I often cry when I watch a sad drama or a sad movie.

If there is a law Korean men can\'t cry, then I will change my nationality to the other place which allows me to show my sadness.

>>If there is a law that states Korean men can\'t cry, then I will change my nationality where I am allowed to show my sadness.

I can\'t control tear dropping.

>>I can\'t control my tears from dropping.

Moreover, to make stop tear dropping while yawn is very hard to be controlled since it\'s a kind of natural response.

>>Moreover, to stop one’s tears from dropping or from yawning, is a very hard thing to control since it\'s kind of a natural response.

Anyways, I just finish this writing.

>>Anyway, I am ending this writing.