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What is your opinion about having tattoos? If you had the chance, would you get a tattoo? Why or why not?
i agree with having enough tattoos. But, i disagree with having too many tattoos on body. It looks messy and weird. If i had the chance, i would get a letter tattoo on my wrist. It is very notable so that i can remind myself when i get through hard times. and it looks so nice. On the other hand, Sometimes, i care about some people who are very conservative.Maybe they would be very uncomfortable when they see my tattoos on my wrist. There are still too many people who are very conservative to tattoos. So, i want to get tattoos when this kinds of bias dissapears.
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Hi, Jay! ^^
~t. Ally
That\'s such a nice thing to say. ^^
And I agree with you too!
I personally think that tattoos are alright as long as it doesn\'t go overboard.
But I do respect the art.
I hope you get a tattoo someday!
I\'m sure the bias will be gone in a couple of years. ^^
~t. Ally
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I agree with having enough tattoos.
>> CORRECT!
But, i disagree with having too many tattoos on body.
>> But, i disagree with having too many tattoos on the body.
It looks messy and weird.
>> CORRECT!
If i had the chance, i would get a letter tattoo on my wrist.
>> CORRECT!
It is very notable so that i can remind myself when i get through hard times. and it looks so nice.
>> It is very notable, so that I can remind myself that I was able to get through hard times, and it will also look so nice.
On the other hand, Sometimes, i care about some people who are very conservative.
>> On the other hand, sometimes I care about the thoughts of people who are very conservative.
Maybe they would be very uncomfortable when they see my tattoos on my wrist.
>> CORRECT!
There are still too many people who are very conservative to tattoos.
>> There are still too many people who are very conservative about tattoos.
So, i want to get tattoos when this kinds of bias dissapears.
>> So, I want to get tattoos when this kind of bias disappears.
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