HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
Are the drinking and driving laws in your country too strict, not strict enough or just about right? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
The law is not strict enough. Theseday car accident happens near elementary shcool.
So elementary school student was dead by the accident.
After then, many people claim that the law is more strict.
I am agree with that. Especially young students must not to be dead any longer.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Serena.^^ Thank you for doing your homework once again. It is just sad that it took one student to die before they implemented a stricter law against drunk driving. But I do hope there would be no more deaths caused by drunk driving. ~ teacher Jane c\",)
The law is not strict enough.
>>> CORRECT =)
Theseday car accident happens near elementary shcool.
>>> These days, car accidents happen near elementary schools.
So elementary school student was dead by the accident.
>>> So an elementary school student died by accident.
After then, many people claim that the law is more strict.
>>> After that, many people demanded that the law be stricter.
I am agree with that.
>>> I agree with that.
Especially young students must not to be dead any longer.
>>> Especially young students shouldn\'t die because of accidents any longer.
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