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I am going to tell you about my friend that we’ve met in the social group which is sharing our hobby that going to the gallery. She is always try to listen to others speaking. I am consistently amazed by her attention. And she always think other person first than herself. So that is why I think she is kind.
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I am going to tell you about my friend that we’ve met in the social group which is sharing our hobby that going to the gallery.
>> I am going to tell you about my friend that we’ve met in the social media group which is we share about our hobby going to the gallery.
She is always try to listen to others speaking.
>>> She always try to listen to others opinion.
I am consistently amazed by her attention.
>>> CORRECT
>>OR: I\'m amazed by her personality.
And she always think other person first than herself.
>>> And she always think about others first than herself.
So that is why I think she is kind.
>>> That\'s why, I think she is kind.
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