Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What are the most noticeable changes that Korea has had because of global warming? Give at least 3 and describe each briefly
First, Summer comes earlier than before. Summer used to start at July in old days. But, nowadays, It\'s very hot from June. I think it\'s the most noticeable thing for Koreans. Second, I don\'t know astronomy exactly. But, I think stars are less conspicuous than before. Of course, There would be lots of reasons to cause it. But, I think global warming is one of them. Third, Many campaigns have been started because of global warming. We are applying car rotation to all laborers who work for the government. and there are many electronic cars on the road.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Jay. ^^
Oh my. :(
I hope we find a way to make the environment better again.
~t. Ally
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First, Summer comes earlier than before. Summer used to start at July in old days.
>> First, summer comes earlier than before. Summer used to start in July in the old days.
But, nowadays, It\'s very hot from June.
>> CORRECT!
I think it\'s the most noticeable thing for Koreans.
>> CORRECT!
Second, I don\'t know astronomy exactly.
>> Second, I don\'t know much about astronomy.
But, I think stars are less conspicuous than before.
>> But I think stars are less conspicuous than they were before.
Of course, there would be lots of reasons to cause it.
>> CORRECT!
But, I think global warming is one of them.
>> CORRECT!
Third, many campaigns have been started because of global warming.
>> CORRECT!
We are applying car rotation to all laborers who work for the government. and there are many electronic cars on the road.
>> We are applying a car rotation law to all laborers who work for the government, and there are many electronic cars on the road.
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