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When I was 12, I saw the movie called \"Gataka\".
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That\'s story is that people make a person by genetic manipulation.
>> That story is about people creating other people by using genetic manipulation.
If married couple make thier kid by genetic manipulation, they have to pay so many money.
>> If a married couple wants to have a child by using genetic manipulation, they have to pay so much money.
So rich people make a superiority kids.
>> So rich people can have superior kids.
But poor people are not able to make a superiority kids.
>> Sadly, poor people cannot have such.
People discriminate between general born people and people by born of genetic manipulation.
>> People discriminate between normally birthed people and people created by that of genetic manipulation.
I was impacted by \"Gataka\".
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Because it is not fiction, nowadays that\'s situation will be able to happen.
>> Because it not fiction, nowadays, that situation could actually happen.
I recommend this movie.
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If you have a time, I hope to you see that movie too.
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