Homework
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What movie has made an impact on you, why?
I watched a movie \' Your name is\' recently on the internet. But, I didn\'t feel like watching it Because it is an animation movie. and I had a kind of bias that animation movies are bad. But, this movie broke the bias. It\'s even funnier and more touching than any kinds of movie i\' ve ever seen. and then i thought what if i don\'t watch this movie. then, maybe, I would not see these kinds of movies forever and experience an another world. So, this movie is very important for me to break the wall to watch animation movies.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Jay!
Wow, it must have been pretty good then. ^^
I\'m glad you started liking animation movies.
~t. Ally
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I watched a movie \' Your name is\' recently on the internet.
>> I recently watched the movie \"Your name is...\" on the internet.
But, I didn\'t feel like watching it Because it is an animation movie. and I had a kind of bias that animation movies are bad.
>> I didn\'t feel like watching it at first because it is an animation movie, and I had a kind of bias that animation movies are bad.
But, this movie broke the bias.
>> But this movie broke my bias.
It\'s even funnier and more touching than any kinds of movie i\' ve ever seen. and then i thought what if i don\'t watch this movie. then, maybe, I would not see these kinds of movies forever and experience an another world.
>> It\'s even funnier and more touching than any kind of movie I\'ve ever seen, then I thought \"What if I don\'t watch this movie? Then maybe I wouldn\'t try to see these kinds of movie forever and I won\'t experience another world.\"
So, this movie is very important for me to break the wall to watch animation movies.
>> So, this movie is very important to me because it made me let down my walls in watching animation movies.
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